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In this short story we are taken on a journey by way of Jason, a mild mannered young man looking for work anyway he can get it. ShinguAmito is brilliant in his depiction of kid in over his head.

Jason finds himself in a test to see if he is worthy of a job with a rag tag team of shadowy figures, whom the writer does a wonderful job of adding depth to. These members of the crew are dark and mysterious and the reader is kept on the edge of his or her seat.

By the end, we like Jason are left in a state of shock at the events that unfolded. Knowing that what has taken place can never be undone or forgotten. The writer transplants us into this world where things go bad very quickly and we are left, with Jason asking only one question: What have I done?

The writing was clean and organized. We are never lost and plot unfolds nicely. The characters are memorable and so is the ending
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ShinguAmito Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Student General Artist
many thanks for the wonderful review! I'm flattered both you and :iconclockerzero: wrote critiques full of praise!! I can only hope I continue to improve and excel in writing from here on!
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JuuniLee Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013   Writer
Well, you deserve the recognition :) Loved the story. Best of Luck...
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ShinguAmito Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Student General Artist
many thanks!! It's gonna be a tough contest for sure!!
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